Comments on: Can you proffread my essay on how the media effects teen body image? http://alternativetreatmentfordiabetes.com/564/can-you-proffread-my-essay-on-how-the-media-effects-teen-body-image/ Treatment and Alternative Medication options for Diabetes Tue, 07 Sep 2010 07:48:08 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: rae http://alternativetreatmentfordiabetes.com/564/can-you-proffread-my-essay-on-how-the-media-effects-teen-body-image/comment-page-1/#comment-625 rae Mon, 20 Apr 2009 19:36:58 +0000 http://alternativetreatmentfordiabetes.com/564/can-you-proffread-my-essay-on-how-the-media-effects-teen-body-image/#comment-625 Your ideas are sound. I would suggest reading this out loud to yourself so you can hear the grammar the way you have it written. Even better, have someone read it out loud to you. also, if it's an essay for school, I wouldn't use contractions -- i.e., don't use *don't* use 'do not' or 'does not', etc... do you need to cite your info?? watch your spelling ... i.e. there (a place or state of being) and their (showing ownship to someone or something). Your ideas are sound. I would suggest reading this out loud to yourself so you can hear the grammar the way you have it written. Even better, have someone read it out loud to you.

also, if it's an essay for school, I wouldn't use contractions — i.e., don't use *don't* use 'do not' or 'does not', etc… do you need to cite your info??

watch your spelling … i.e. there (a place or state of being) and their (showing ownship to someone or something).

]]> By: weemaryanne again AM http://alternativetreatmentfordiabetes.com/564/can-you-proffread-my-essay-on-how-the-media-effects-teen-body-image/comment-page-1/#comment-626 weemaryanne again AM Mon, 20 Apr 2009 19:36:58 +0000 http://alternativetreatmentfordiabetes.com/564/can-you-proffread-my-essay-on-how-the-media-effects-teen-body-image/#comment-626 No. Proofreading is a good skill to acquire, but you won't acquire it by getting someone else to do it for you. I will give you a hint: Those long paragraphs should be split into two or three shorter ones. No. Proofreading is a good skill to acquire, but you won't acquire it by getting someone else to do it for you.

I will give you a hint: Those long paragraphs should be split into two or three shorter ones.

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